One scorching hot ,summers evening on “I’m a celebrity get me out of here”, Lady La La was preparing to win the impossible tasks that lay in front of her .Her first task was getting through a maze of Cacti. She walked through the prickly green cacti. As she emerged from the first task she came to a door and bolted through . A spotlight shined on a small voilin lying beside a glamorous chair. She started playing but before she could play a full verse the ground opened up and she fell down a deep hole .She landed with a thump and heard a surly voice .“l got you now”…….
By Catherine and Emily
What a suspenseful ending, Catherine and Emily! A game show is a really creative idea to fit all the prompt words in one story. I like this sentence best: “She landed with a thump and heard a surly voice.” It’s short and sweet, but still action-packed.