The Best Teacher?

As the birds chirped in the cool Spring morning Lilly woke up excitedly and danced across the concrete floor and rushed down the stairs.She packed her lunch and hoped into her fluffy jumper and the rest of her school uniform.This was her big day ,she had it all planned out .she would sneak into school extra early on her red scooter and set up all her mischievous pranks .When she got there she climbed into the half open window she had like that yesterday.Lilly went into he teachers room Mr Mcloughlin’s room and set up her disgusting pranks.When school was opened Mr Mcloughlin got a big surprise and ran all the way home!! The end
By Isabelle and clíodhna

One thought on “The Best Teacher?”

  1. Well done, Isabelle and clíodhna, very well thought out story! I don’t know if I want to know what this disgusting prank is. I’m glad that I’m not Mr Mcloughlin! Maybe see if you can add in extra punctuation to make more of an impact on the reader?
    Overall excellent work! 🙂

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