The Rusty Bike 🚲

It was a sunny day and Lilly and her friend Jack where going on a
walk together. Lilly met Jack at his house and they started walking,
they where a few minute in and they decided to walk into the
woods. Lilly saw this big tree in the distance so they decided to walk
over there to have a look. When they got over there Jack noticed
something sticking out of the tree so they decided to pull it out Jack
and Lilly pulled and pulled and at the last pull they got it out it was a
rusty bike . Jack was so disappointed and he was going to walk away
but Lilly realised that it looked like a bike from the 1960.s because in
pictures she saw that her grandfather had one they pulled it all the
way home. The next day they decide to wash it up and paint it and
give it to her grandfather for a surprise a few hours later and the
where done when they surprised her grandfather he was over the
moon.
The end by Niamh Fitzgerald

2 thoughts on “The Rusty Bike 🚲”

  1. Hello, Niamh!
    I really liked your story! It has a really sweet ending. Have you ever found something like that in the woods? I was on a walk once and I came across a statue of a bike; it was really cool. I’m excited to check out more of your posts!
    – Cameron

  2. Hi Niamh! I really like how your story has a sense of motion, from what the friends are doing, to their discovery of the bike, to the joy Lilly’s grandfather got from their giving him the bike.

    Keep writing!

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