Creature?

Lou Matthia 100 word challenge:

 

One summers night three boys were cycling home from there friends house. They all turned home until there was one boy left. His name was Dustin. Dustin heard a noise coming from the woods. He left his bike tied to a tree. He thought it was just an animal until it came out of hiding… What creature is this you may ask? He had no idea. It was big and slimy, its teeth were stained yellow and pointed. The thing grabbed Dustin and took him through a tunnel. That boy was announced missing for months on end, until one day his bike guided them to a clue…

 

 

 

THE END

 

One thought on “Creature?”

  1. That was quite a scary story, Lou. I do hope that Dustin was ok and that the clue led rescuers to find him. The way you describe the creature really made me shiver. Your description of the teeth as ‘stained yellow and pointed’ is particularly good – or do I mean horrible? Have a look at your first sentence again – I think you have used the wrong spelling of ‘there’. Great story!

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