It was a warm summer’s evening in 2068, and Jenny was putting the finishing touches to her new invention. She was creating a teleportation box! This wasn’t any ordinary teleportation box, it was in the shape of a yellow bike. Suddenly, she heard a noise outside. She jumped to her feet as the window flew open and in came Becky on her flying hoverboard. ‘Wow, does the teleportation box work?’ asked Becky. She clicked her fingers and the family robot rushed in. Jenny pointed to the bike and the robot rushed over and sat down on the bike. Jenny pressed remote control and with a gush of wind the robot disappeared into thin air.
By Kate H
Your very creative, good job on your paragraph
From, Kaiah
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