Dave is out of a coma, we stopped the violin, things are back to normal or at least that is what we thought. We were all sitting around our dusty old couch, when we got a phone call from Mr Donald (The Mare of Lolly Town). There is a gang of pirates taking over Lollies Castle! Shooting anybody who came near with a giant cannon- ball! Everyone needs you Lena, you and your gang. When they reached the town Square everyone was gazing at them in dispare. What are they gonna do now?
TO BE CONTINUED!!!
Hi Shona and Cara, this is a very creative approach to this week’s Prompt! This has left me with many questions – is Mr Donald safe from the pirate attack? Will Lena and the gang be able to protect Lolly Town? Amazing work!
Keep on working on your grammar and punctuation as you think of new things to write.
Good work guys.
Rigon (Team 100WC)
London, England