One foggy afternoon 🌞 Aileen and Sarah were out for a walk when the noticed something suspicious!!! “Come on Aileen let’s go and check it out!!!!”exclaimed Sarah in a hurry.The two loving cousins skipped happily down the concrete trail and saw a huge I mean huge slide it was like it was built for a giant!!!!!! “ Wow!!!!” cried Aileen in disbelief. “ If only it was a bit smaller we could have so much fun!!!”explained Sarah to her cousin who was unaware of this!!! “Ok maybe when we are older let’s go home for lunch” The two besties once again they skipped home and interested there mother’s who were enjoying a cup of tea by the 🔥 fire.
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That is a nice write-up; with them both stumbled upon a surprise while on a stroll. You may want to check for grammar and punctuation, next time you do such lovely stories.
Keep on writing!